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| Newer page: | version 4 | Last edited on Tuesday, June 21, 2005 11:47:10 pm | by DavidHallett | Revert |
| Older page: | version 3 | Last edited on Tuesday, June 21, 2005 11:42:58 pm | by DavidHallett | Revert |
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rest of town by a bridge, that during the day was raised so
the ships could sail thru' into the harbour.
Now Walmit was the town mailman, which everyone thought was
- quite ironic, as Walmit had a penchant for blowing up peoples
- letter-boxes
! Needless to say, because of this many of the
+ quite ironic, as Walmit had a penchant for blowing up people's
+ letterboxes
! Needless to say, because of this many of the
townsfolk would not allow Walmit to deliver their mail to him from
- fear that he would blow up their letter boxes
! (Which is only
+ fear that he would blow up their letterboxes
! (Which is only
logical)
The people that overcame their fear that their letterboxes
would be blown up had the added frustration that Walmit lived
@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@
"I have a letter for you!"
Because the harbour bridge was up during the day Walmit was only
able to get out at night to do this. The townsfolk would stagger
- to the window, half alseep
and say:
+ to the window, half asleep
and say:
"Uuurgh... that's nice Walmit, why did you
wake me up to tell me that? Why didn't you
put it in the mailbox, so I could get it in
@@ -90,12 +90,12 @@
where the townsfolk nursed him back to health, in the process
ignoring the death sentence that the H.M.C. placed on his head.
This made the townsfolk very angry - they held a meeting in
- the town square and burnt effgies
of the H.M.C members, and
+ the town square and burnt effigies
of the H.M.C members, and
insulted them, questioning the legitimacy of their conception,
and made statements about what the H.M.C members liked to do
- in their spare time, by themsleves
when no-one else was looking.
+ in their spare time, by themselves
when no-one else was looking.
"Why can they not see it! The mail is not getting thru'
In this town!"
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that the unemployed postman lived in. (The unemployed postman was
not at the meeting, as Walmit had woken him during the night to
give him his mail, and he had overslept.
As the townsfolk turned their gaze down the main street they
- could see the rows of letter-boxes
that Walmit, the mailman, had
+ could see the rows of letterboxes
that Walmit, the mailman, had
blown up.
The townsfolk then turned their gaze out to the harbour, where
in the distance they could see Walmit sitting on his island with
- the town's mail. Walmit could not deliever
it because it was day-
+ the town's mail. Walmit could not deliver
it because it was day-
time and the bridge was up so the ships could get in. They saw
Walmit get up and try to open the door to his tiny shack - but a
sack of mail blocked the door, so he picked up the sack and threw
it into the harbour.
