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Newer page: version 2 Last edited on Friday, September 22, 2006 11:05:30 am by CraigBox Revert
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-Thank you for coming along to Software Freedom Day on September 16th. We're sending this email to you as you gave us permission to do so
+Thank you for stopping to talk to us at our Software Freedom Day display, at Centreplace on September 16th. We're sending this email to you as you were kind gave us your e-mail address on the day
  
-Hopefully you've had the chance to try the free software out . If you're not sure where to start have a look at Firefox or OpenOffice on the Kiaora CD or restart the computer with the Ubuntu CD in. 
+Hopefully you've had the chance to try out the software we were giving away . If you're not sure where to start, have a look at Firefox or OpenOffice.org on the Kiaora CD, or restart the computer with the Ubuntu CD in. 
  
-Waikato Linux Users Group (WLUG) is here for the support of free ( open source) software. Remember that you can get help by visiting our website at http://wlug.org.nz which has information and also links to our web based forums as well
+Waikato Linux Users Group (WLUG) exists to support and advocate free and open source software. We run monthly meetings, as well as offering support by our website at http://www. wlug.org.nz/, which has a large knowledge base, and also links to our mailing list and web forums. 
  
-Our next meeting is on Monday and information can be found at http://wlug.org.nz/MeetingTopics.2006-09-25 - the venue is TW2 .07 at Waikato University and the start time is 7:30 pm. Free pizza will be provided! 
+Our next meeting is on Monday and information about it can be found at http://wlug.org.nz/MeetingTopics.2006-09-25. The venue is room TW.2 .07 at Waikato University (off Gate 4) and the start time is 7:30 pm. Free pizza will be provided! 
  
-Don't forget to enter the competition at http://wlug.org.nz/sfd - not many people have entered and you have a good chance of winning a $100 Dick Smiths voucher. 
+Don't forget to enter the competition at http://wlug.org.nz/sfd - not many people have entered, so you have a good chance of winning a $100 Dick Smiths voucher. We will also be giving away two official Software Freedom Day t-shirts to two lucky people at our next meeting
  
 (This is the only time we will email you. If you want to receive further emails from WLUG then you can joing our mailing list by going to http://wlug.org.nz/WlugMailingList)